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12/16/06
Lu’s Poem!
Filed under: Writing
Posted by: Gracie @ 4:57 pm

My sister Lu (aka Emily) wrote this wonderful poem about Susan Pevensie (aka ME). Let’s all have a round of applause for our very own Lucy P.!

She steps through the door,

But still she is blind,

She had even found all she could find.

Her mind filled with thoughts,

Sensible and Smart,

But really, what she needs,

Is to open her heart.

Has she seen the wonderful things?

Has she seen the driads, the Kings?

Will she remain lost, to be found?

Can she even look around?

When the lion roars,

She will realize,

She will be able to see with her eyes.

She will become Queen,

Gentle and kind,

She will believe,

She is no longer blind.

55 Responses to “Lu’s Poem!”

  1. Lulu Says:
    Thanks.
  2. Alyssa Says:
    I really liked it. I love reading and writing poems too! Thanks for sending it to me Emily!
  3. Lulu Says:
    Welcome!!!
  4. Edmund P. Says:
    Yeah, you are so good at poems. As for me, I stink! My favorite one was either Susan’s or Peter’s.
  5. Lulu Says:
    Thanks. I like Susan’s the best.
  6. Alyssa Says:
    Me too.
  7. Edmund P. Says:
    Has any one ever read the book Eragon? Its such a great book! And the movie came out a week ago.
  8. *NarnianGirl* Says:
    I have, it’s a great book! I really want to see the movie, even though Emma told me that it’s not very true to the book. BUT ANYWAY….
  9. LuLu Says:
    Ummm…Ehem. Back to my POEM!!!
  10. Edmund P. Says:
    Yeah! My friend said that they combined the three books, and took out a lot of stuff! >:(
  11. LucyP0104 Says:
    EHEM. My poem.
  12. Edmund P. Says:
    I can’t wait to see that movie, did you see it or are going to see it Grace? We should go together.
  13. LucyP0104 Says:
    You are doing that on purpose, Lydia.
  14. Edmund P. Says:
    Tee hee! Sorry, I won’t do that any more. It was fun.
  15. Edmund P. Says:
    What does P0104 stand for?
  16. Alyssa Says:
    You mean book one and to are combined, there is no three. I got the second book for Christmas!
  17. Anna Popplewell Says:
    The P0104 thing doesn’t staand for anything. It’s just coolio.
  18. LucyP0104 Says:
    No, LucyP- as in Lucy Pevensie- 0104- January fourth is my Birthday!!! Yay!!!
  19. Edmund P. Says:
    You were born in the year 104? THATS CREEPY!
  20. Leslie_Burke Says:
    No no. 01- January 04- forth (happy birthday to me:)!)
  21. Leslie_Burke Says:
    It doesn’t matter much anymore, though, cause I changed my nickname.
  22. Arya Says:
    Okay, now I understand.
  23. Mystery person Says:
    Me too!
  24. Leslie_Burke Says:
    Mystery person is intelligent.
  25. Arya Says:
    But weren’t you the one who wrote it Emily?
  26. N D girl Says:
    Note to self: mystery person likes to say me too.
  27. Mystery person Says:
    Yes I know I am, thank you Leslie.
  28. Arya Says:
    Don’t forget to write down: THE MYSTERY PERSON IS FREAKING ME OUT!
  29. Mystery person Says:
    But that was a nice thing that Leslie said to me.
  30. Arya Says:
    Ooooooooooookay…………….
  31. Leslie_Burke Says:
    Lydia, methinks it’s you.
  32. Mystery person Says:
    Really?
  33. Leslie_Burke Says:
    No, actually, meknows it’s you.
  34. Arya Says:
    I’ll give you a hint………………………….. ITS NOT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  35. Mystery person Says:
    Are you sure?
  36. Arya Says:
    Yes, I’m not only sure, I’M POSITIVE!
  37. Mystery person Says:
    Are you sure your positive???
  38. Leslie_Burke Says:
    It is Alyssa.
  39. Mystery person Says:
    Hey did you know I LOVE DARK CHOCOLATE! So does my dog but it gives her the runs.
  40. Mystery person Says:
    ewwwwwwwwwwwww….. Why did I say that?!?!?!I’m sorry everyone but I keep wanting to say random things.
  41. Mystery person Says:
    I’m just a random person, with a random attitude, with a random dog, who likes random chocolate.
  42. Mystery person Says:
    Does that make sence to you? I know it’s pretty random.
  43. N D girl Says:
    You are driving me NUTS with all your randomness.
  44. Mystery person Says:
    Sorry, I just had a bit to much sweedish fish to day.
  45. N D girl Says:
    Ya think?
  46. Arya Says:
    Alyssa, you said I was weird for being random and you hated it! And now you’re doing it!
  47. N D girl Says:
    No I didn’t. I was just really hyper.
  48. Anonymous Says:
    What the heck are we talking about????
  49. ??? Says:
    Um wat r we tlking bout?
  50. ??? Says:
    Ok I read through it and now I know wat people are talking about
  51. abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz Says:
    Wow that ??? girl is very mysterious (if I spelled that right)
  52. Stephanie A. Says:
    Oh ??? was me. My friend did it at first and I let her than she wanted me to keep on doing it.
  53. Sherlock Holmes Says:
    abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz was also you, Stephanie. Yup, I can tell.
  54. Stephanie A. Says:
    Wait what??
  55. Stephanie A. Says:
    Wait I told you on the phone that abcdefghijklmnop ect. was not me!!! Don’t you believe me!!!???

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